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Re: Crash Landing
Wow. This is really good. You're not a terribe writer at all, you're super really good. LOl, if that makes any sense. I don't have any reviews on my first ...
Mar 17, 2012 -
Re: Medic.
This is really good, if you were trying to rhyme, you did except for with "insane" and "again." Also you didn't rhyme when you said "there" and "clear." However, it ...
Mar 10, 2012 -
Re: Burning love
The only thing I saw wrong with this piece is the fact that you used text language. Like "u" and "ur." If you are going to write something this beautiful, ...
Mar 10, 2012 -
Re: Something
Wow. This is very powerful. I here cries from nowhere Wrong here. It's supposed to be hear. Just thought I'd let you know and you could do a bit of ...
Jan 24, 2012 -
Re: Truth
Wow. That's all I can really say. This describes my life right now perfectly. I think that if this based on reality then I'm proud of you, even if I ...
Jan 24, 2012